Thread:Booster Beetle/@comment-3406131-20160112142330

Also, you asked for help on your edits, here some advices:
 * Read again this message that was posted to you.
 * Use full links and not disambiguation links
 * Don't forget we use in-universe point of view, in past tense, and in chronological order (not editorial)
 * Be careful when you write stuff to check the meaning remains clear. Example with Svartalfheim, most of the stuff is about Malekith, but he isn't mentioned in other ways than "he" in many sentences after paragraphes who aren't about him.
 * Creating chapters help (or force) to respect the chronological order, and made it more comfortable to read. 