Thread:Squirrelman1/@comment-4651179-20190302002824

Please, when you're editing articles to update the history text, take into consideration that the purpose of a wiki contributor is to add information for an unknowing reader. While the information in the site needs to be concise, it also needs to be clear and leave the hypothetical reader fulfilled.

I'm going to use as an example your latest edit on Poseidon Aegaeus (Earth-616). You updated the page with the following piece of information:

"When Nyx got free, she came and killed all the gods that were there, including Poseidon."

This is very bare-boned. It doesn't explain who is Nyx (it doesn't even link to her article), it doesn't explain where did she get free from, it doesn't explain where is "there" or why did she kill all the gods. You made a similar edit in Ruth Aldine (Earth-616) not too long ago, which read:

"She later committed suicide because sha had a vision of her death, and it was too much."

I asked another user if he could expand on this piece of information, and this was the result:

"After the worldwide chaos caused by the X-Man and the subsequent disappearance of both him and the majority of the X-Men, the aggression against mutants reached new heights. During that period Ruth went into hiding with the Morlocks and had visions of multiple possible futures, in all of them she met a painful and brutal death. Ruth decided to commit suicide to end her life on her own terms, but in her last act before that she reached to Cyclops to warn him about futility of his actions."

It adds context to Blindfold's death, a lot of it. I have yet to read Uncanny X-Men, and the original version left me unsatisfied and confused. The second version gave me almost as much information as I would've gotten if I had actually read that issue. That is the principle one should take into account when adding information to pages in the site.

For the sake of a better reading experience of visitors of the site, I'm asking that you to put more effort into the information that you add to articles.

Thank you. 