Thread:Ultimantium/@comment-4651179-20191002233726

While it's appreciated that you updated the pages for the Punisher and Zemo in order to reflect their deaths, please be sure to take into account the "Other Dos and Don'ts" from the Manual of Style, namely: "When updating the History section of an article, be sure to take into account what is already present in the page to ensure that the necessary context to understand your addition is present. If not, add it as part of your edit."

I'm referring to the fact that the information added to each page feels very isolated from the rest. Both Zemo and Castle's articles abruptly place the reader in the specific situation that led to the character's immediate death without any kind of context. The pieces of text suffer from both superfluity and lack of details. Zemo's article mentions the specific way Kingpin taunted Zemo, but doesn't say why did the Kingpin decide to kill Zemo or how did Ghost kill him. In the case of the Punisher's article, it mentions how the Winter Soldier specifically declared his fall was fatal, but doesn't explain why were he and the Black Widow at odds with Castle (especially since the last piece of information before your update shows them being allied), and it doesn't say what was Black Widow trying to get the Punisher to stand down from doing.

I hope that you take this into account the next time you update a page. 