User blog comment:Hman11/The Amazing Spider-Man 2 possible plot (based off of post by UltimateBub)/@comment-3307906-20120818041814

So, this was a good write up. But I have a problem with this as well, but their not that major. Like UltimateBub said very original, and that's great in my opinion, if I don't mention it here, it's probably fine or good. But I agree with UltimateBub in a few places like, Peter and MJ falling in love so fast, or rather if that's not what you implied, how Peter bounced back so quick. Pete needs more time to recuperate. My REAL issue though, is Peter burying Gwen. While its sweet, it's also kinda odd and looks MAD suspicious. "I buried your daughter, after a supposed bus crash that could've happened anywhere, and no one saw me carry her body away..." See what I mean, dude? It makes her look like the killer from the get go and/or makes him look crazy, and her family will hate him for 'taking the liberty' to bury THEIR daughter that wasn't in a respectful funeral burial.

Bernard got killed off too quick by the way. What if the serum wears off again? Goblin is screwed if he's on his own. And Spidey with armor...of any kind is a no for me. It's one of the reasons why I like this suit more than the last, I hate the Spidey suit that looks more like padding and has raised designs (urethane webbing) but in general yeah, please no armor.

Don't have any problems with your casting choices. However I am 100% behind you on Jensen Ackles as Eddie!