Thread:WarBlade/@comment-5164970-20170509141610/@comment-1618941-20170509142712

Other admins here have also mentioned the KISS principle (keep it short and simple)

Your new version was littered with problems. The first paragraph was mostly extraneous data listing anyone that had presumably been in contact contact with Yondu. The second paragraph was littered with so many grammar problems I would not have allowed it on any of the wikis I administrate on. The third paragraph delves into unnecessary fiddly details that are just exposition in the movies.

And so on.

Verbosity is never the solution to make a great piece of reading. Articles covering fictional character histories tend to be far more engaging and legible by not delving into inconsequential details.