Thread:Twilder/@comment-22439-20141021191628/@comment-967462-20141023140627

Pretty much everything reads like it was written by someone who speaks English as a second language. I just don't know enough about the character to confidently correct it (I was looking at the page to try and learn more about her after reading Original Sin).

Here's an example: "Raised into a perfect environment with oxygen-rich atmosphere in order to enhance her brain growth and her longevity, she was taught by Midas to kill every kind of beings"

I can understand what is trying to say, but it can be said in a much clearer way. Hence, trying to flag the page for clean up.