Thread:ADour/@comment-5104412-20131108194714/@comment-5104412-20131109000131

Yes, he has contributed positively. But i dont agree when he judge the vocabulary of my edits to the detriment of the content. I consider this too much subjective. For example, the expression "few moments" could mean few minutes or few hours. It depends on the context (in this case the source is just not too precise). So he is wrong when apparently thinks that i intended to mean few seconds. "Apprehensively feared" is just an emphasis. It is also not automatichally wrong. But yes, he has contributed well.