Thread:Warmachine375/@comment-5165026-20120707010952

Hi. I would like to ask you to sometimes consider the way things are written before you alter them. I put thoughts into the tenses and grammar I used, and sometimes I feel you just ... break it up. So please think more carefully about it.

This is just an example; http://marvel.wikia.com/Iron_Man:_Armored_Adventures_Season_2_24?s=wldiff&diff=0&oldid=1989868 I use "lie" because it seems to be happening in real storytime, not a flashback. And "her" was a reference to Pepper's impatience, the others don't feel they are wasting time by explaining her how to pilot a deadly weapon.

It just seems to me that you often jump ahead in your edits. 