Thread:Alfirejones/@comment-3406131-20180905114554/@comment-3406131-20180905231711

A few other advices:
 * Be sure of the relevancy of some subjects, whether regarding their presence in a section or in the article at all.
 * Please also be careful when adding references: If you add a reference that is valid for only part of the paragraph, re-add citation tags where they are needed.

For example (well, you're mostly concerned by the reference part, as the rest was presumably created by someone else, but while I'm at correcting a paragraph, I'll do the full tour): Alfirejones wrote: Another race that existed on the islands was the Spider-People decedents of the Spider God; Omm. They built the temple of the Spider beneath the Hidaka Mountains. They were enemis of the monstrous Serpent-Men of Set as Omm and Set developed an enmity.
 * The reference wasn't valid for the whole paragraph.
 * It's essential to add the "citation needed" tag to avoid "false references".
 * The referenced part:
 * isn't to the article "Japanese history"
 * is an over-interpretation of distinct facts from two handbooks. It's better to stick to the comics and handbooks' text to avoid deriving into false information
 * There was a lack of links where they could exist

Undoniel wrote: The Spider-People, descendants of the spider-god Omm, built the Temple of the Spider beneath the Hidaka Mountains (modern-day Hokkaid Prefecture).

Have a good day, I'll try to assist you in this article correction (there a lot of over-precise and over-interpreted material, unreferenced)