Thread:Undoniel/@comment-5270921-20131029170806/@comment-3406131-20131109224640

I was replacing link to Exonim and Exonims for their own specific page link, and I saw your text on the Master Mold, and while I respect the fact that it is complete, it seems more a part-synopsis of the X-Force time in that future, or a part-description of the event in that future.

That's essentially due to the first paragraph, important to the story, but maybe you could rewrite it in a more focused way on the Master Mold.

I'm currently on something else, but if you have time to make few rearrangements on that. (but that's not really important) Good night.