Thread:Farlstendoiro/@comment-3406131-20170210121518

Hi!

Thanks for your massive edits on Lomen (Earth-616) page.

Just a few tips:
 * Better use for your refs (the other way isn't bad, I used it a lot for external links, but for internal links, better use the classic way, more "readable")
 * That's a personal advice, but if an handbook entry is about the characters of te page, you can simply add the ref, with the precision only for other entries.
 * No need to add "alien" in the origins, given we already have dakkamite in the origin field who automatically add the.
 * Some fields such as identity, citizenship or marital status require a simple answer corresponding to things added to the Module:Citizenship. You have to add a field such as "citizenship2" to add references.
 * On the "unknown" stuff, I prefer to not add anything, but if the entries clearly told they're unknown, I tend to believe that's all right

Also, on some occasions, I think you should refrain a little bit your add of references, using references that englobes the thing you want to prove (if there is such references of course). I don't know much about this character, but I think you might be exagerating the use of references (around 60 for many of those) on some occasions (but to be honest, it's really good to see a page that much well-referenced).
 * For example, you sometimes add a Handbook reference in a paragraph, causinh the need to re-reference the rest of the paragraph, but if the handbook isn't bringing new information, it isn't required and the comics (but like I said, I haven't read most of those entries so it is possible that none of those books contain a complete telling of the event, and in this case, you're right to act this way, but at this point, I have to tell you it seems excessive). Same way if two handbooks state the same, no need to add both of them.

Also, as you seems to possess the Gamer's Handbook of the Marvel Universe, but our wikia doesn't have any page for it: Could you add those ?

Thanks in advance, and for your work, have a good day ! 