Thread:BeyonderGod/@comment-61022-20140530153329/@comment-61022-20140608201920

BeyonderGod wrote: Nausiated.....seriously can you stop saying proper grammar I am clearly using it you honestly don't know if mean my apology if I am replying back to be unbanned I could one of those banned members who can slander this wikia and etc but I am not like that I made a mistake we all do it's clearly human nature specially online.

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BeyonderGod wrote: I BeyonderGod of the Marvel/Dc Database Community would like to for the 2nd time apologize to Nausiated for my inappropriate behavior more importantly for my foul language toward him and his personal life since he is a Admin which is a high rank position that deserves respect for Registered or Non-Registered members.

(1) This is a run on sentence. (2) There should be a comma after "I BeyonderGod" (3) Dc has incorrect capitalization. The DC Comics trade name is capital D capital C. (4) behaviour was spelled incorrectly. (5) You should have ended the sentence after the word "behaviour" and started a new sentence, hence why this first statement is a run on sentence. (6) Incorrect capitalization on "Admin" "Registered" and "Non-Registered" these do not need to be capitalized.

BeyonderGod wrote: I also apologize for the 3rd time for my improper grammar in my last apologize and I am hoping to be a responsible contributor to the Forum's and the Pages that go along with them.

(1) Incorrect word in the statement "I also apologize... for my grammar in my last apologize" you used the verb apologize instead of the plural, apology.

(2) "Forum's" is incorrect because you are basically saying "Forums is" the proper plural form for forum is forums. No apostrophe.

BeyonderGod wrote: I am also apologizing to the other Administrator's of the Marvel Database Community for starting a pointless debate over fictional character's that has nothing to do with the wikia or to any of there pages.

Again the improper usage of an apostrophe and incorrect capitalization. administrator and community should not be capitalized. Wikia should be capitalized since it is a proper noun. It is also administrators and characters, no apostrophes.

BeyonderGod wrote: I BeyonderGod will also like to apologize to Jamie the founder of the wikia for strictly annoying him over such a useless problem that could have been talked out though other way's like the talk pages.

(1) Missing a comma after "BeyonderGod" (2) Wikia is capitalized, proper noun. Although he is the founder of the wiki (common noun so it does not need to be capitalized) he is not the founder of Wikia itself. (3) Also the apostrophe on "way's" is incorrect as you are saying "way is" instead of "ways".

BeyonderGod wrote: I will not in anyway lose my temper in any other situation similar or close to the problem that caused Nausiated to get out his busy schedule to stop and commenting for me for absolutely no reason then to correct my own mistakes that I have made to my apology earlier.

(1) Run on sentence and the language used does not make any sense. A proper way of staying this would be "I will not in any way, lose my temper in any other situation similar or close to the problem between Nausiated and I."

(2) Incorrect use of the word "anyway", as this is a word used to continue the thread of a story or account. For example "Anyway, after 6:00 I went to the store". You should have said "any way" as your context is to state that you will not lose your temper in any possible way one can do so.

(3) Further the rest of the statement does not make any grammatical sense either "to get out his busy schedule to stop and commenting for me for absolutely no reason then to correct my own mistakes that I have made to my apology earlier."


 * "to get out of his busy schedule" suggests that I am trying to get out of my busy schedule.


 * Incorrect tense for "commenting" in the context you are saying this in you should say "comment"

BeyonderGod wrote: So I sincerely hope he will take this apologize and that in anyway possible take this as a joke I am hoping to make this small problem in the literal archives hoping it won't be resurfaced in any future arguments or Debates.

(1) Run on sentence. (2) Using the word "apologize" instead of "apology". (3) A comma could go after apology, and a period after joke. (4) One does not "take" an apology, one "accepts" an apology. Incorrect word. (5) Incorrect word tense: You said "possible" when you should have said "possibly" (6) The last statement does not make any sense. "I am hoping to make this small problem in the literal archives hoping it won't be resurfaced in any future arguments or Debates." (7) Comma between archives and hoping. (8) Incorrect tense in using the word "resurfaced" instead of "resurface" (9) Capitalization error: you capitalized the word debates when it should not be.

BeyonderGod wrote: Nausiated.....seriously can you stop saying proper grammar I am clearly using it you honestly don't know if mean my apology if I am replying back to be unbanned I could one of those banned members who can slander this wikia and etc but I am not like that I made a mistake we all do it's clearly human nature specially online.

(1) Another run on sentence. A comma is required between the word "grammar" and "I" a period should go between the words "it" and "you", "you should be capitalized. Another period should follow "unbanned" and "I" (2) "...." is an unnecessary pause, a comma would be the proper usage here. (3) the phrase "stop saying proper grammar" is a sentence fragment. Basically you are saying you want me to stop using the phrase "proper grammar", when in reality you are stating that you disagree with my statement that you are using incorrect grammar. (4) Also the second statement is not phrased properly you used the wording "you honestly don't know if mean my apology" when you should have said "You honestly don't know if I mean my apology". (5) Incorrect capitalization Wikia should be capitalized as it is a proper noun, it should be followed by "site" if that was your intended usage. However you could have also used "wiki" by itself as it is the common noun used and does not need to be capitalized. (6) comma between "mistake" and "we" (7) Spelling error: "specially" which explains a particular person. You meant to use the word "especially" which points out a definitive fact.