Thread:Nausiated/@comment-27704252-20161226040831/@comment-61022-20161226193647

I'll give you some examples:

First, you constantly refer to Jean Grey by her real name, even in the appearance section. Her code name at the time was Marvel Girl.

You frequently put "(gray)" in parenthesis when you are referring to the Hulk. That's unnecessary since if people are looking at the cover they can see that it is the gray Hulk.

You hardly mention the subplot about SHIELD hunting the Hulk, or even explain what Rick Jones was doing in that story.

You also don't go into any detail to explain the motivations of characters. Like X-Factor's feelings about mutant hunting, their motivations for calling SHIELD and the misgivings they feel about doing so.

These are all important plot elements you missed that are important to the story.