Thread:Undoniel/@comment-5111077-20151208152543/@comment-3406131-20151208163249

I checked quickly (I'm on another thing right now), here my advice.
 * Past tense.
 * Less pictures, better ones, more adapted size, added before the title
 * Maybe develop more the stories (without falling into the overdetails) (that message from ADour includes what I'm talking about.