User blog comment:ZachWadeWilson/Victor/@comment-1895174-20130917055407/@comment-1895174-20130917154840

Then, if you want to write more like this, make that clearer. Your story is well-written, but there's nothing inherently connecting the events to Doctor Doom at all. This could just be some creepypasta about a boy named Victor.

And also make sure to post it on the Marvel Comics Fanon wiki.