Hey, just a quick FYI, I reverted your last edit that added May Parker (Peter and Mary Jane's baby) from the list of characters that appear in the story. The baby doesn't actually appear in the story. Mary Jane's pregnancy is mentioned, but the child itself is never mentioned. This story takes place before Amazing Spider-Man #418, baby May's first appearance, so she hadn't been born at this point.
Just thought I'd give you the heads up on that. Easy mistake to make.